Urgh Diana I'm so glad you got through! Your style's so defined now and I keep falling in love with it over and over with every revision you make. The pseudo-Victorian atmosphere is so great. I love youuuu
Your audition is really lovely, the colours and line quality are nice, and the rough brush is something that I really love. The only thing is that is gets hard to read in some areas, but this may just be my eyesight being terrible. Maybe a simpler font? With decorative ones like you've used you often have to make them a little larger to make sure readability is still ok. Though, the shift from lineless to lined is a little distracting.. of course, this may just be what I've thought, others may not be so distracted by things like that. The contrast between the characters is nice too, make a good team c: But as I said before, well done c: